David Guinness

Nice thing is, this time around with the ads, I've actually seen several things of interest to me. :)

The frolicking pony is very pretentious so he always skipped around trees. When suddenly groundhogs attacked nearby settlers who were smoking some turkeys. Howling winds blasted rifles, the men graspe

The frolicking pony is very pretentious so he always skipped around trees. When suddenly groundhogs attacked nearby settlers who were smoking some turkeys. Howling winds blasted rifles, the men graspe

Welcome to YWS, Sharty. Ah, Paris... :D Tiny town, with the Interstate running through it, no? And if I remember correctly, the town square is beautiful. Hope you enjoy your ...

The frolicking pony is very pretentious so he always skipped around trees. When suddenly groundhogs attacked nearby settlers who were smoking some turkeys. Howling winds blasted rifles, the men graspe

The frolicking pony is very pretentious so he always skipped around trees. When suddenly groundhogs attacked nearby settlers who were smoking some turkeys. Howling winds blasted rifles, the men graspe

Hi Kippy! I'm not a greeter, but I don't care! :D Welcome to the YWS. I look forward to reading some of your work!

The frolicking pony is very pretentious so he always skipped around trees. When suddenly groundhogs attacked nearby settlers who were smoking some turkeys. Howling winds blasted rifles, the men graspe

This poem is pretty to read. Most of the line breaks are okay, but you're still missing punctuation in several places, which makes it difficult to read. The reader should ...

The frolicking pony is very pretentious so he always skipped around trees. When suddenly groundhogs attacked nearby settlers who were smoking some turkeys. Howling winds blasted rifles, the men graspe

"I did at one time. My sisters were taken away long ago. My bother died in The Battle. But my entire life, I have lived alone... I wish to speak ...

I'll only take the time to discuss Gummy's post: I'm not sure about that slavery bit...Perhaps it's closer to that in the Old Testament, but most likely not now... Of ...

There's only grey. And black. Except when there's white, and that's only fog. Why bother with ethics? I'm always right! - Sheard What is the primary differentiation between war and ...

I agree with Snoink about the line breaks. Read it aloud, and when you come to a natural break, hit ENTER and start a new line. An even quicker way ...

It's great, Snoink. It reminds me of an old "Beverly band" recording I once heard. And so I thart a little think That thart so I was thinking But thartting ...